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Penny

Penny found a berrie,
Squeezed it, and licked the juice.
You could see it on her nose,
you could see it on her toes!
After that, she ate the rest

I once had a dog,
who did the same thing.
So I named her after Penny.
But poor doggy penny,
died the next day.

I suffered a  loss,
So I did it myself.
Ate the berrie.
Just like old Pennie!

I would not recommend,
eating a berrie.
That you've never seen,
As you could poison yourself!

I do miss my dear penny.
She was the sweetest girl
With a red spiky colour
that had a small bell.
A cheery wee fellow,
As you could probably tell!



Author notes

My friend had a dog named penny, but she died a few years ago...
I thought this dog was like old penny
Written October 18th, 2005

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  • prettyeyes
    October 19, 2005
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    tehe.. I've been dying to see some new favorites of mine post. I haven't seen any lately until this morning.. Yaya =)