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Every strokes of your tongue.
My emotion starts to run.
My heart cries in pleasure.
I close my eyes.
My sanity I began to lose.
I don't want you to stop.
No, don't stop.
You got chills running up and down.
My back with every gentle stroke.
I'm loving your touch.
Just to think we're only 5 minutes into this.
I'm loving the warmness of your tongue.
Playing with my ring.
Got me on the break of coming.
Damn!
And that's only by using your tongue.
I bite my lip to keep from screaming.
Sweet whispers of your name.
As your tongue move up and down and round and round.
I try to push you away.
I don't know how much more I can take.
I need to grant some control.
You loving the way I’m tensing up.
Trying to pull away.
You hold me tighter.
Not letting me go.
Not letting me move.
Not wanting me to grant my control.
The room starts to spin.
I close my eyes.
My control I'm losing.
Damn!
I can't remember the last time I felt this damn good.
I start cumin.

By: Levesta

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Written October 18th, 2005

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  • XxX The Cake XxX
    January 26
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    man sis this was another great one
    so sexy


  • Galaxy2
    January 14
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    You're a witch in enticing your readers by using your verbal powers.
    I'm bewitched, my dear, by your treatment of erotic. You make it so hot that a person like me is bound to be burnt.
    Your libido makes your writes very very erotic and charming.
    I love you for all your eroticas, my darling!
    Kisses, kisses, and more kisses!

    Galaxy2


  • March 24, 2006
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    Cumminsum!

    WOW!!!...This was right on my Christmas wish list. My imagination was right there with the tongue, in a very educated way... You are every man's cream-dream...And like the last lady says in comment, when its up...keep it up...Mmmmm. Manchild,

  • xXxbecca10o8o7xXx
    October 18, 2005
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    hey this is a really great poem loved it keep it up!!!!!
    ~*becca*~
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