Tattered yellow monarch remains
Scattered all around the room
given away by telltale stains
kitten crouching cloud of doom
with powder on her chin...
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Written October 17th, 2005
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wow short and good and it was nicly said and you went on but not on and ongood luck and sorry it took so long to rea
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Wonderful
Hi,rainwalker:
I am new glad to meeet you,I love this it is very well crafted i can just see the whole scene in my mind wonderful.You are a very talented poet,well done.
mrsfoss -
Afarin
'The equation of love is not applicable to ant fixed rules of the world.It kneel down the logic,breaks the lines and captivates hearts!
Talking about feelings sounds too hard for me but you always can do that.It’s so good.I enjoy it.
Golden days are waiting for you..so forget the coldness of this winter.Snow will melt away soon and green spring will come with the buds of success.
Be vernal...like a vernal leaf!!
~Massy~
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oh they are poisonous...but not really deadly...she's learned her lesson...thus the crouching cloud of doom part...she was definitely not feeling well...poor baby.
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very well written
This is so cute. The kitten looking all innocent. I can just see it now. Very nice write. But not if the monarch was poison. I hope it is not.
etherealforu
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I guess that means the kitten ate the monarch? Poor little kitten doesn't it know that monarchs are poisionous to eat?
Poor kitty...
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