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-the weakness in my knees-

Oh the way it felt,
My first time,
Now every time I look in your eyes
I melt down,
like my first time,
Now you have moved on
And maybe I should too,
But the weakness in my knees
The strength to move on and change my life
I can do it,
I know I can,
If I never see your face

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Written October 17th, 2005

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  • slowlycrashing
    October 18, 2005
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    awww jessica very very cute =) i loved it bye girl!


  • aeroheadv1
    October 17, 2005
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    Cool and True

    Okay, I liked the last lines the best. "I can do it, I know I can," and then "If I never see your face" cool. Lines I think everyone can relate at some time or another in their own lives. Short but sweet, I liked this piece.