I was standing by the wall waiting for you
Why aren't you here yet?
My day's been crap and I need a friend to talk to
Why does it feel so cold?
The rain trickles down the wall soaking my back
Why do I feel so lonely?
A group of bullies walk past hurling insults at me
Where did they get that info'?
I only told you...
Then I notice one of the bullies is you
How could you?
And... why?
Author notes
Written October 17th, 2005
A contest entry
- Betrayal by Neon Lights.
300 points, ended October 28, 2005, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Another great write, and betrayel sucks, I can relate. Very well expressed, keep up the good work.
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I know how that is. Your poem is short and sweet..to the point and you got it across Bravo
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Aww!!!! That's awful!!! Lol, I thought you'd be too tall for anyone to pick on you
Be happy.
Love,
Meri -
Wow short but yet full of emotion. I loved the questions you asked in this. I absolutely love this. It gets right to the point. Amazing job! Thanks for entering and good luck!
~Fi~
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