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You're Like A Drug

You're like a drug, baby
And I was the addict
You filled me up
Mind, body and soul
I needed you
And I had you every night
But you left me
And took my addiction with you
You found someone else to poison
Now I'm left here shaking and trembling
Needing you back in my life
I can't eat, I can't sleep
Wondering what drug you're giving him
It hurts so bad, baby
I need a shot of you
To go straight to my heart
Fill me up again
Like you use to do
Tap my vein
Wrap your tourniquet around my heart
I'm left here in the dark
Just one more dose
That's all I need of you
Like a Heroine fiend
You're all I need
To get me through the day
I'm straightening out my life, you see
I needed you, but you didn't need me
When I see you with him
I want to go insane
But this addiction that had me
Is starting to go away
I've still got my days
But I know soon you'll fade away
I've still got my prescriptions
For when you want to come back
But until then, I'm getting on with life.

Author notes

Ugh.. my gf left me for another guy.  Funny this is.. she's a lesbian and he's gay.  Figure THAT one out everyone...
Written October 17th, 2005

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  • PlayLikeWeAreInLove gold member
    January 1, 2006
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    weird (not the poem, the fact that shes lesbian and hes gay) great poem though, i love the lines;

    I need a shot of you
    To go straight to my heart

    and i like :

    Tap my vein
    Wrap your tourniquet around my heart
    I'm left here in the dark

    awesome poem, i like it a lot!! good luck and byz
    ~Tainted}


  • Chunkers
    November 20, 2005
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    great write

    i love the anaolgy of love and drugs and how it's like to be addicted, Great write
    Good luck in the contest

  • BlackedAshes
    October 22, 2005
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    Awwwwwww that was kinda sweet in a way lol nice write keep it up

    -----------------Kelsea


  • Zsadist Gates
    October 18, 2005
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    I know this feeling all too well. You described it so very well. I could feel the emotions I had felt in this situation come rushing back to me. Great write, and good luck in the contest!


  • bleedingmascara
    October 17, 2005
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    Wow, yes love is like a drug, and it's hard to get over, and not be addicted to it. Good luck in the contest.
    Chelsea

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