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This Special Eve

*This special eve*
comes once a year
To feel the loved ones
we hold so dear

Maybe tonight
will be the time
To hear mom and dad
say one more time

*We love you*

Or maybe another
will come my way
and send their love
to me this day

You are missed
but never forgotten
We love you so
and this please know

This special Eve

We will let you
KNOW

Author notes

This is for my parents who passed over to the Summerlands in 2002.
Written October 17th, 2005

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  • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
    October 17, 2005
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    Well Done!

    heartfelt and raw, reality in words! very touching appeal and well written format! Would you care to see my entry? called: "Cycles"


  • Rose Chloris
    October 17, 2005
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    Thanks for entering.