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The Perfect Man

I'm lookin for the perfect man,
The kind who understands the plan,
The kind who ain't afraid to speak his mind,
The kind who's tough but also sweet 'n' kind,
He's gotta be real, gotta be true,
To hear the three words "I-Love-You",
And if he succeeds 'n' wins my heart,
I swear we'll never be far apart,
'Cause I'll love him 'n' he'll love me,
And we'll show others what love can be...

    ~:~anais~:~
        ~:~black~:~

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Written October 17th, 2005

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  • November 15, 2005
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    Pretty simple and straightforward poem, looking for that one guy to make you happy...but simple doesn't have to be bad, this one says things we all feel, at any rate. Oh, and the font is a little dark for the black background.


  • Mariposita
    October 23, 2005
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    i dont think that ive seent his side of you before. i loved this poem it was really sweet and sinsere, didnt spell that right, but this was really heartfelt, i know how you feel. dont get caught up in their shit girl, keep it real and love ya always, april


  • thealexrose
    October 18, 2005
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    it sucks? no way!

    Did you comment on your own stuff?
    But to me this is good.
    It's really sweet.
    Alexia


  • AnaisBlack
    October 18, 2005
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    sucks

    this was ooookk! and that's ok.