A soft sigh of content passed Kira's full lips as she buried herself into Sharazon's chest. He was tugging on the middle loop on her collar fondly and she smiled up at him before reigning kisses over his silken chest.
Sharazon smiled lovingly down at his precious pet, running a hand through her silken hair adoringly. "You sure you can take more, love?" he whispered heatedly.
The dragoness met his gaze with a wanton look, though also quite playfully. "Never more sure. I'll make all of your desires reality, if you'll allow me."
Euphoria erased coherent thought from their minds.
Author notes
Sharazon belongs to Opaque Beauty.
Eh...I've written better, but I hope you like it anyway. If the number of words are off, please notify me and I will edit it immediately when I get the chance.
Written October 17th, 2005
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A contest entry
- Some 100 words by MariGoes.
350 points, ended October 24, 2005, 1 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Ah...more of your teeny tiny story madness! Haha...so...what exactly was she doin' for him?
I keed, I keed. The tease makes it all the better. Love the description of the bondage collar.
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Beautiful
This one is absolutely beautiful Rose. Magical. Gorgeous. Yes, that's the word, Gorgeous.
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Thank you for your very kind words. I certainly appreciate them.
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Lovely
Very prettily done. Not so erotic that it becomes distasteful, but nicly written in order to create a story that is sweet and satisfying. -
Thank you for your comment.
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That's good to know.
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Thank you.
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Well, it's not the best I've ever done. It doesn't suck, but I like the others I have like this better. But thank you for your comment. I appreciate your kind words.
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short and sweet. Good poem, story thing! ^^
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Very nicely done, I am by no means an expert on this kind of work but I did like it.Good luck in the contest.
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Interesting...quite a good title for the piece you have written here.
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omce again well done i love it really i do i can't getover how amazing this is i really can't
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ive reda this like four times and well if this "isn't very good" your other work must be amazing i love this alot and am goin to read more by you for definate! WOW!
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Not exactly a sexual game, but some people actually do use it as one. This relationship is actually Master/Pet...So Kira is actually his pet. I'm glad you liked it all the same. Good luck with judging.
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Different indeed
I'm noot sure if I understood the pet reference well, but I think it is about some, hm..sexual game...? With the pet thought or not, it is still a very good read. Sensual and leading to an exciting imagery. Nicely done!
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There are so many different kind of love relationships now and this one is one of my favorites these days. Thank you for your comment.
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this is very different from what I usually read, but it's well done and unique. As Yem said, all those things come to us in many different ways - and this one is different. Good job.
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Roleplaying is some great fun and has basically been my muse for quite some time now. Thank you kindly for your comment.
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This is as odd as it is beautifully written. Far be it for me to judge role play, but it did take me by surprise. Love, passion and desire comes in many ways and you've shown us another avenue that it takes. Not everything is traditional, not in love or writing..
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I don't think this one's all that special, but thanks you, darlin'.
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Yay! Another great write! They're relationship is so sweet! I love it! Good luck.
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