Every since you left stuff changed.
It will never be the same with out you.
Why could it been another day you left.
another way you left us that day
It was dark and time was flying bye
I had that feelin that somthin was going down
I woke up to the sound of death they told me .
some one had wreck down the road the said over the scanner
that they were trying to revie him
their was one person there beside you when you
were on the ground he was their as your best Friend
as every body prayed to the lord that you would be ok
my dad was your only real Friend he was their for you
You left behind two kid's now their life's has been changed
when we enter the room were they had you
It was me my dad and brother when I seen you there
It was like every thing had hit me
I sat down and they started to talk
they played his song that mad my cry he was are only real friend
now he's gone all because of beer now there's two kid's with no father
is beer worth it no can it heal pain like they say
dedicated to- BOB we will never forget you and we hope you are in a better place and one day we will all be back to gather to rasie hell and till that day we pray and hope your watching over your baby boy's
Author notes
this is deacated to my friend
Written October 17th, 2005
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Very awsumness
wow this is a really great poem you have out done you self
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It will get better I promise. Keep your chin up and remember they aren't away from you in spirit and they are with you in heart. Just remember everything gets better with time.
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This is a pretty good write, the only problem you seem to have is with spelling, grammar and punctuation, which could detract from something so well expressed.
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wow...very sad!! I know this feeling. a friend dieing to drunk drivers. I have one friend who lost her son to it, and now her husband was recently killed by a Semi....but I know the effect that death has..very beautiful poem, very well written! It has a clear and beautiful meaning, one that peple should listen to. very well done...gave me goosebumos and made me want to cry...very sad and dark yet beautiful and needs to be heard. Great job
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awwwww...so very sad......nice write.....keep up the good poems.....hurry put more online!!!!!
devils-angel69.....
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This was so sad, this brought a tear to my eyes, you have a way with words, and you know how to make the reader feel it, great job, sorry for your loss xxx QueenT ooo
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brilliant
wat a touching poem im sorrie to hear that one of your friends has died and that two kids hasd been left without a father im reli sorry to hear that but he is in a better place . when u feel lost think of him hes looking down on u he will never leave u in spirit
this was a great poem and i engoyed it keep it up and im sure this poem will touch loads of people like it has touched me thank u
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This is awesome man, one of your best. I loved it, you did such an awesome Job on this. I loved it, this is seriously impressive, full of emotion. YOu did an awesome Job man.
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i've had a lot of stuff hadden to me that changed my life and my poetry has tookin the blow to so sorry but just tell what you think thnaks and god bless
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