Earthly stars of summers end,
float and drift upon a wind.
Sparkles of it's scattering soul,
promise new spring life where it blows.
On the wind it's cherished force,
life that bloomed flows on it's course.
Carried soft and mildly on a breeze,
across the field as high as trees.
Drift and land on leaf and turf,
awaiting spring in fertile earth.
As with all beauty born of nature,
it will rebirth in fields blessed by her.
Under blanketed cover of winter's repose,
lays till springs melting of winter snows.
~~~Suseann~~~
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Written October 16th, 2005
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Exquisite!
This is truly beautiful susann, it has a wonderful light feel to it. The whole sonnet flows with ease, allowing your reader to enjoy the beauty your words evoke. I love sonnet's and this is one you can be especially proud of, well done!
~Katie~
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Beautifully written Suseann flowed very nicely.
I enjoyed it hope all is well with you. I've got
a middle ear infection and tired at times. ♥
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Another beautiful sonnet. The words flow with a tender grace. Thank yuou for entering the contest.
Sam
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This is a wonderfully written poem. You have expressed nature so well and sublime in your penning of her.
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I read this earlier but got interrupted about half-way through it. This is beautiful suseann. I love the way you write about nature. It's as if you're one with it. Good luck in the contest.
~Lyrical
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