What do you do when you love someone so much
you just can't let them go?
If they leave, would you forget about existence?
Would you forget about all the good times you had and
focus on all the things falling down on you?
Would you isolate yourself from the world and cry yourself to sleep?
What do you do when you love someone so much
you obsess over them?
When you dream about them?
Would you think about them constantly
always planning your next move?
What do you do when you love someone so much
you finally let them go?
Would you feel incomplete,
or would you forget about them and move on with your life?
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Written October 16th, 2005
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Okay hi Brittany. I'm shannon D's friend and if u r related to him then u must be a little wacky but he'll drive ne one insane. Ne ways this was really good, especially for one of your first. You have a natural talent for poetry. Great job and keep writing.
~*shannon marie*~ -
Great Poem
AAAWWWEEEE . . . **sniffle, sniffle** . . . This poem was so sad, but sweet, B. Great Job!! I never knew you had such a knack for poetry. What a surprise
! And you said you didn't think you could write good poetry. Well, like I said, Great Poem!!! Can't wait to read more. RiCh
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that is so sad.yet good. you really showed how you felt.
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