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i never thought

i never thought that i would be able to love again.
i never thought it would be someone so special.
when you walked into my life i didn't think that i would end up loving you as i do.
we were so happy together.
we lived so far apart and it hurt everday that i couldn't see you..
but when i did it was a beautiful moment.
when i saw you all i wanted to do was be as close to you as possible.
i wanted to jump into your skin and never leave you again.
i wanted to be held in your arms forever.
i never thought that i would end up wanting to spend all of my life with you.
i never thought that i would tell you that i couldn't do this anymore.. that i couldn't handle not being near you all the time and we should just forget about eachother.
then you forgave me and we loved eachother for one more week before you left me.
left me in the dark with pain so unbearable i didn't know how to rid myself of it.
you will never realize how much i miss you.
i'm sorry we can not see eachother all the time.. but did we have to cut it off just because of distance.
i believe we could of managed through it.
i guess you didn't.
i'm so sorry i will miss you dearly.
i love you.
i gues it was just my fantasy..

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just writing to vent
Written October 15th, 2005

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  • firestarter64
    November 28, 2005
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    this is such a beautiful and sad poem...the classic tale of tragic love that distance just seems to shatter...this was a beautiful poem Katie...awesome job.

    -Katie

  • 2manyaddictions
    October 15, 2005
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    thank you.. i'm glad you see my point of view too... katie


  • Bweeveed
    October 15, 2005
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    mm long distance relationships can be amazing or be awful.

    i agree more w/ the awful :/ but still feeling the good is a lot better than not feeling it at all

    hah, wow...how cliche is that? still, wonderful poem, keep it up even if you're just writing to vent, thats how most of my poems are rachel

  • xo rock star 86
    October 15, 2005
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    I totally understand what you're saying....great job! <3