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Lencio Loves Ashley

Missing image
Love is felt so deeply
Embedded for eternity
Nascent marriage vows
Cupid's arrow allows
Indite and profess
Osculate as lips press

Levant later from the people
Oscillating bell in steeple
Valentine's Day you wed  
Everyone hears vows said
So many happy tears shed

Amorous couple are they  
She stole Lencio's heart away
Head over heals in love he fell  
Lencio heard wedding bells
Everlasting love and happiness
You give each other completeness



Author notes

\"Love is pure and great".(Lucky those people to whom it met).

Written October 15th, 2005

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  • Sandygram silver member
    October 16, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    IThank you poeticgenious for the lovely comment. It is so appreciated. Take care, Sandy


  • Sandygram silver member
    October 16, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    I am so glad you liked it. I do wish you and your love Ashley all the best life may bring you. I am a romantic myself so I love this contest. It was so sweet. Take care, Sandy


  • Sandygram silver member
    October 16, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you so much for your kind words
    I Always wait for your voice to be heard
    I value your comments my friend
    You are always honest, never pretend
    So I send you a smile and word of good cheer
    You will always be to me a friend so dear.

    As always you have witten a beautiful comment that brings me smiles from across the miles. Thank you for that. Take care and God Bless you. Sandy
    Edited on Oct 16, 10:53 because ''.


  • Lencio Rodrigues
    October 16, 2005
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    OMG, 4 months to go, but it is so full of excitement here. You have all made Ashley's and my heart very warm. Although I am more than nervous about all this, I am also glad at what is happening here on AP. Thank you so much for entering and God bless you and your family, and Manisha, orionis for hosting this contest in my honor. And yes, it was like our hearts spoke to each other lol!!!

    Love and light,
    Lencio


  • shubs
    October 15, 2005
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    Hear Hear! This is a song for jubilation and my tongue twisted in agony at the words used out here..my tongue was oscillating ..hhahaaha..this goes out so dearly to the wedding couple...God bless you Sandy for this lovefilled treatise==Shubs

  • poeticgenius44
    October 15, 2005
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    this is sweet, there is nothing like true love huh?? loved it very much, great job!

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