Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Inside Secret

I always have to thank God

Author notes

This is for a contest. This is how I feel, when I look at the sun set and rise, or when I wake up to Golden leaves and dew on the grass. Please leave me serious comments. Ta
Written October 15th, 2005

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • sugarbear310
    October 16, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    If the Lord is your strength... Then you should thank him every day.... Thanks for sharing.... Keep writing and Praising the Lord... Good luck in the contest...Sugarbear

  • maelburleson
    October 15, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    Great confession...Although it isn't something you hide from people is it...I hope you profess your religion every chance you get...i too am a relgious person...I thank God every day...Four and Five times a day..He is my strength to continue day by day...Thanks so much for sharing...it touched my heart very deeply....Keep up the wonderful work...Good luck in the contest...
    Mandi Burleson

    PS...Your background and color combination make this a little hard to read...well for me at least...my sight is not the greatest in the world...just a suggestion...


  • Carnivore
    October 15, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    This is really a bad thing. I know lots of religious people who do this. I myself am not religios...But sometimes I even catch myself thanking someone/thing up there. ^_^