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Memories

I thought I had moved on,
I thought the memories had faded.
I thought the words you said,
turned cold as stone.
I thought wrong.
You are here in my every thought,
my every memory,
I bring you back to life with every breath I take.
And I can't take it back.

I am back.
To the only place that ever mattered,
The only place I could call home.
To find your face wipped away,
expunged.
Your face taken off the wall,
and the pictures set aside.
Your name doesnt exist anymore,
but the memories were left behind.

January 14th,
April 2nd,
April 9th.

The days my world shattered.
You came in alone,
and left the same.
Alone.
With nothing.
Leaving these memories.
Everlasting.

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Written October 15th, 2005

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  • Art
    October 25, 2005
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    I can relate You had a lot of emotion and it really affected me it was a good write and i hope you do well in this contest.


  • kittykat327
    October 24, 2005
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    Thsi is a beautiful poem I can feel the emotion you put into this writing. Great Job and keep upi the writing


  • Princess Perdue gold member
    October 19, 2005
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    I absolutely love this poem and could relate to it, it was well written and had a good flow, great write! shaz xx


  • Neon Lights
    October 17, 2005
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    Very good poem. I love how you chose to write this. It flowed so well and had a very good tone to it. Wonderful job. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!
    ~Fi~