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To Be In Love With You

To be in love with you
Is like a dream in the night
Like a mausoleum enthralled in your beauty
Loving you is my desire
To be in love with you
Is like a rose, burning in the moonlight rain
Just to be under the nightsky with you
Gazing into your eyes and bleeding my heart

To be in love with you
Rues never to exist
I silhouette chivalry for your love
For it is in your eyes that I live
To be in love with you
Is like a dance in the amorous rain
Recreating the passion in flames
For I love you too much

To be in love with you
Is like a cavern in lust
To be in love with you
Is like a wine too deep
To be in love with you
Is like a passion of which I desire
To be in love with you
Is like a dream that has come true

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Written October 14th, 2005

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  • MidniteRae
    October 15, 2005
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    loved it

    WoW..
    This is pretty much how I feel write now.
    This poem had a lot emotion and was filled with imagery.
    My favorite line in this poem is
    "Is like a rose, burning in the moonlight rain"
    That was awesome.
    This poem remind me of my boyfriend.
    Awesome awesome write.
    Keep up the fantastic work!
    Good Luck in my contest!
    ~Midnite Rae