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Ten Feet Tall

Im ten feet tall
And my head is small
I look kind of akward
When I have to bend forward
To miss the ceiling
Im practically kneeling
When I walk through the door
Ouch! I hit my head once more

Im ten feet tall
And my head is small
I have big feet
My shoes equal a naval fleet
Im not your normal man
It takes a sweater to cover my hand
I look kind of silly
With the head sized like a lily

Im ten feet tall
And my head is small
People point and laugh
At my neck of a giraffee
People dont think its okay
That all I can say
Is "I blame it on being ten feet tall
And have a head so small"

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Written October 14th, 2005

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  • Rikkusaki
    October 14, 2005
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    Nice repetition and rhythm I got a nice chuckle out of reading your poem and I am greatly looking forward to more of the same kind Good work
    Edited on Oct 15, 8:32 p.m. because ''.