I dont understand how this could be
How could you break up with me
And why am I the one to cry
When you said with out me you would die
I thought about how you were my true love
And how mich I'd miss your kiss
But being without you
Is what I am really going to miss
Late at night I sit up and cry
It's too hard to stop so I dont even try
I want things to be how they were
When you were with me and didnt like her
Knowing what you did broke my heart
And that just one girl can walk in and tear us apart
How can you make me feel so sad and blue
I must've meant nothing to you
You didnt just do something small
You did the worst of all
You cheated on me with my best friend
You might just as well have put my life to and end
Author notes
Written October 14th, 2005
A contest entry
- Dark Love Hurts by Hes My Oxygen.
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I hope you never heard what could be dubbed the most painful statement next to "we can still be friends" and that is when you enquired about how he could have said you were the world to him and he says "I meant it at the time" Thats a hard one to swallow. Heard that one myself. I dont know how come people can be so cruel as they are sometimes. You can only hope it bites them back. <3
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this is so sad but a beautiful write well done
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Sorrowful
This is so sad. Sorry you had to go through such disappointments.
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sad! well you are probably better without him. Good Luck in the contest
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dang that is hard. i'm sorry you got so hurt, you deserve way better then this person. thanks for entering and good luck.
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I like this a lot. I like the deep emotion. Nicely written. Great job. Keep it up. Good luck on the contest.
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hey.... I need to catch up with you... who's this about? well, keep writing it's really good... hope things get better. hang in there. if u ever need to talk just call....
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I love your poem, its really deep, and you know what he didnt deserve you if he cheated on you with your ex-best friend, im glad you found happiness again, thare is some one out thare for everyone, love the poem.
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Aww. Hony Im so sorry about the stupid thing. I cant belive all the shit that we deal with. Great poem, Its realy emotional and deep. I love it.
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lol wow it took me like a good ten min. to figure what the hell ur comment said..lol write in english...not slang...lol.
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this is awesome girl this has much more rythem and rhyme then mine this shits hella tight keep writeing for real this is bad ass its a ten for ten two thumbs both big toes and an applause resses pieces im out like a fat kid in dodgeball
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