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THe Crossover…………..

THe Crossover…………..

The first thing I thought ,
When you left me alone,
Was whom shall I love ,
Now that you’re gone.

You left me stranded,
In this world of love bared,
Harassing and hallucinating,
Leaving me half dead and scared.

Whom shall I live for,
Now that you’re gone,
To care, love confide,
To laugh and to frown.

Was it me , was it you
Or was it god’s will,
But whatever ,Now that you’re gone ,
My heart who shall Hence  fill?

I knew you wanted me not to cry,
But wouldn’t you cry
I ask, wouldn’t you,
When all in you ,but your soul did die.

When I look at the sky,
I know you’re up there,
Somewhere among the stars,
Watching me while mirth with angels share.

But why you,had it to be
Of all people here,
Is it that,Of our love
The greatest of  Gods fear?

One day , the truth shall be mine,
When I shall join the angels among you,
But I shall not want as all men dying,
For any living eyes to dew.  

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Written October 14th, 2005

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  • x Gemini x
    February 21, 2007

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    First, let me thank you for entering my contest.

    Second:

    The flow and imagery was very well done. Creative perspective. Easily related to.

    Nice


  • dp robertson
    October 20, 2005
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    no,but thanks for entering

    David