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The Beauty of Color

Beautiful sunsets
Colors wash across the sky
God's rainbow palette

Author notes

Haiku attempt
Written October 14th, 2005

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A contest entry

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  • Sara Bellem
    October 20, 2005
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    Oh Wow! This is gorgeous! Is purple your favorite color? It was my best friend's (Vicki) favorite color and Megan's favorite color too ... I always thought of purple as an "okay" (I liked it but its never been my favorite or worse color) color but you made me see how pretty it is by your haiku and contrast in colors. Great Job Mom! Love You Sara Dawn


  • Mary Anne
    October 14, 2005
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    Thanks, took your advice. I do like it better.

    Mary Anne ♥


  • Samplette gold member
    October 14, 2005
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    Ya know...this is good...but you have used color twice...maybe rainbow in the last line...or something else...just a thought Thanks again for entering and following the rules.
    Sam