The feeling of the blade cutting
The feeling of all my pain being cut away
Their will never be another day
Their's no other way to end it
The blade cutting so deep it hit's the soul
I have no other to free this pain
I use to love and feel the pain of heart break
Now's their's no pain no love no feeling's
No one no's what I've gone thought
They don't no the pain that use to run thought me
Till the day the soul can't take it no more
When he shut's the door on me I will
do it my way day by day
the anger in me burst out like a bomb
Every one run I not done I will have fun my way
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Written October 14th, 2005
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Woah..Dale this is very deep! My god, finally got my pw back..and well this poem makes me wanna cry. And...it was written on my bday
We should talk more...alot of things have changed since me, you, shelby and Moose hung out!
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well , lets see, its alright, very sad in a way, you should try writing happy poems, its pretty hard, prob because no ones life is really all that happy and perfect , so anyway good job i give you a five
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SAD
Ummmmm you yell at me for doing it and nows its my turn DAMN YOU STOP AND YOU DONT I WOULNT OK Ok? -
^^ Like that person said, I dont read cutter poems, and That isnt God's Way Dale, And you know it isnt...
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a lil angry, a lil dark, but good write. even though you misspelled the word through twice, it's ok. It's still a good poem nonetheless. Anywho, try and take a look at some of my poetry, I got some dark ones too you know? And the meaning of this poem is enthusiastically brought out by your strong emotions and words. Good write, pen on poet
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do it my way day by day
the anger in me burst out like a bomb
this bit remindedme of "Calm like a bomb," by Rage Against The Machine -
Sorry i wasted your point but i don't read cutters poetry
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I loved this poem... I mean wow... my fav part was
"The feeling of the blade cutting
The feeling of all my pain being cut away
Their will never be another day
Their's no other way to end it
The blade cutting so deep it hit's the soul
I have no other to free this pain
I use to love and feel the pain of heart break
Now's their's no pain no love no feeling's"
it was turly moving
LOVE ALWAYS WITH KISSES AND HUGS
~~Sara~~
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I used to cut, but I stopped. It sounds like you are in so much deep pain. Im sorry you have to go through this. Though I can tell you even though it may seem there is no light at the end of the tunnel. There is a light shining. I have found my light in Jesus and also in my husband. I am on the road to recovery though I have been in and out of hospital several times before I met my husband I was ready to kill myself. I now have a life and am expecting a baby early January. Though you may not feel it there is a light at the end of the dark tunnel. Please don't give up.
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nice write.....ur so dark and gray...lol..j/k....keep up the good poems....later!!!!
devils-angel69.....
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