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Memories

Memories are pictures dwelling in your mind
visions that have been etched into your brain  
people and places affect you throughout life  
some can be truly frighten or cause you pain

Life's bad memories are never truly forgotten
yet can be tucked away so you don't feel
now and then appearing without warning
as your mind plays tricks and they seem real

Memories can only hurt you if you let them
remember they are the past not here anymore
they are thoughts of a time past in your life
only snapshots of life in a time lived before

Many times they are best tucked away forever
sometimes giving you the courage to be strong
memories can leave you feeling lost and lonely
and the feeling that somehow you don't belong

Replace the bad ones with some that are good
don't make the same mistakes as in your past
create good memories to fill your troubled mind
for happy memories allow the happiness to last

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Hi David, I don't want to be judged in the contest. I just wanted to enter because it's your contest. Sandy Ap, Mom
Written October 14th, 2005

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  • Sandygram
    October 14, 2005
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    Thank you Anu. I loved your comment. ItWas so appreciated. Tsake care, Sandy

  • Sandygram
    October 14, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Oh thank you David for the wonderful comment. I always enjoy reading your opinuons. Take care and have a wonderful weekend Wonderful contest. . Sandy
    Edited on Oct 14, 4:14 p.m. because ''.

  • AnoushkaRustagi
    October 14, 2005
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    keep smiling and shining

    brilliant, fantastic and sophisticated approach.. i liked it very much. Only one thing i would like to say without hearting anyone that its not in out hands to have good memories or bad memories, but which way we want to remember the memories only
    thats under our control. i always remember my love life as a beautiful experience i had not as a failed relationship which i not able to sustain.

  • davidishere
    October 14, 2005
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    i appreciate you entering, and think that this is another fantastic poem, from a fantastic woman by the end this poem brought me so mucj joy, thanks for entering
    -david-