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the love that we behold

A tiny creature with so much talent.
It weaves  a web of life with no challenge,
not a care for how it comes out when done,
nor the care of the world around this one.
It silenty weaves a web of emotions
into a fine peace of art with explosions.
I sit an watch this beauty in amazement
as this web takes a shape and shades it
with colors so magnificent not only captured my attention
it embraced my thoughts and mentioned
feelings of the way life should be.

in the wind of love carrys me above
all of my pain. soothing to a touch.
I think of how this world has a cycle
in which we all stand as these winds shift away my feelings
in the web it also takes with it the
troubles an pain and tells me to keep on caring.

The world is such a silent place in my heart.
This is where i keep you,
in my mind i keep u in my memory,
in my soul is where i hold you an
i vow to never let you go.
I will stand strong and tall along your side.
As these winds blow away the away all the troubles in my mind,
things that were said now are gone,
swept away by a gentle breeze. One day
i come back to find that the winds of life
has connected you to me.

I stand there looking in the dark as the sun sets in my heart, telling me we will never part.Watching the clouds in the distance wind sits over the valleys of life
I vow to keep you because you are my life.
I stand there watching this beauty unfold,
i stand there hand an hand we hold.
I look an hear your voice telling me come to me together
we will see and touch the world with a gentle hand
of love with no worries jus u and me come see.

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still workin on it
Written January 28th, 2003

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  • LizardKing
    January 28, 2003
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    excellent

    Another beautiful write, but I'm still very distracted by the long lines.
    Mike