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smiling fear
my heart begins to tear
to weep
in silence's keep
among the bird and briar
where life becomes a liar
and all I hold dear and true
be shot with an arrow through

Author notes

I was reading a book of classic poetry when inspiration hit and this is just what came out. I do hope you enjoy.
Written January 28th, 2003

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  • aislinn
    January 29, 2003
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    don't touch it!

    It's beautiful! Love it a bunches!
    God Bless!
    Aislinn*

  • SafeHaven
    January 29, 2003
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    excellent

    Very much enjoyed.


  • silent messiah
    January 28, 2003
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    don't touch it!

    neat, short write.
    great flow!
    much enjoyed! ^_^

    -XIII-