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Afraid

I love you
I really do
But I am afraid.
Do you know what of?
I am afraid,
You wont love me because i'm not beautiful
You wont love me because i'm not thin
You wont love me because worst of all,
I'm not even loveable within
I know you'll say its not true,
All of that is lies,
I love you for that too,
Do you know what I am most afraid of?
I am afraid that someday,
I will do somthing stupid,
And when I turn around,
You'll be gone.
And when you're gone..
I will be to.

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Written October 13th, 2005

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  • October 13, 2005
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    Great

    Wow, this is a great poem. So powerful and meaningful. I like the subtle rhythm, It's so sad. i like the honesty in it and a bit of realisticness (if that's a word). I think it's really well written.