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Penny for Your Diner Bar Thoughts

All hail the masquerade,
when the trinket is won, and you vanish in shame.

All hail the masquerade,
when you're standing on the sun, and you can't feel a thing.

All hail the masquerade,
when it's all said and done, and you're still holding your tongue.

All hail the masquerade,
when all is one, and you are the only one dancing.

Author notes

more about the feelings associated with regret of a specific instance.
Written October 13th, 2005

i went with option three.

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  • Jeezus niece
    March 28, 2006
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    nicely done and well thought out! thanks for entering my contest and good luck!


  • in silver script
    January 9, 2006
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    nice feelings in this poem. i cant write much because im at school right now, but this is a good piece. good job.


  • wordsmistress21
    October 13, 2005
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    nice...reminds me of this song from a comic called... V is for Vedetta