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A Poem for HelplessAngel-92 Emily

Far into the wilderness a tiny cry is heard
Not a human crying, not a human word
A whimpering, a snuffling,a tiny little mewl
And in the nearby forest a worried,frantic howl

A flash of white,a furry heap,a crisp and sunny morn
A choir of songbirds singing out, a baby wolf is born
New joy awakes the forest,vision of new life
Man wolf so elated, comes to tend his wife

Pack of wolves together, what an awesome sight
Family for ever waiting for the night
Know that if they're patient it will be there soon
Father wolf and mother, howling at the moon

Singing of the treasure,start of something new
Showing all who hear them,yes this could be you
Hope is there for all to take, now please don't you despair,
We are here to love you and help your heart repair

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Written October 13th, 2005

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  • rabidgnomes
    October 17, 2005
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    wow, I really like this write! excellent work! the rhyming seemed a little forced in some places but it was awesome, all the same!
    rabid


  • So-Alone
    October 13, 2005
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    i loved im touched

    this was awesome i loved it but why did u create it for me i dont understand! i did love it i love wolves and some how u know that thanxz alot! my friend! it is greatly thankful for someone that i dont know to write me such beautiful poem! thanxz alot my dear friend! would u like to be my AP aunt?
    ~~nicki

    thanxz for writing this for me!!
    Edited on Oct 13, 5:29 p.m. because 'spelling'.


  • October 13, 2005
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    Words can not describe!

    WOW!The poem is so beautiful! What can I say? I am so overwhelmed! The new life, a promise of a new beginning, of love that is unconditional!
    I love the rhymes so very much and I love this wolf poem, and the encouragement that this poem portrays! So wonderful and this is so heavenly!
    Thank you so much for creating this masterpiece for my AP daughter and she will be so delighted! You are so kind and so loving with a heart of gold!