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Graham!


open cast brine
founding bride,
Chasm atrium
back in trip, hole.
Whole insight,
chryptic colloseum.
Stab track abstract
Birmingham brain.
Chaos serpent beast,
matching mouth on
oily skin.
Foil and tug, push
in crushing mug.

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Written October 13th, 2005

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  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    December 20, 2008
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    Very interesting write. For me, the words produced some jarring imagery. I enjoyed it.

    Mike