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Rain

Into each life, some rain must fall
And from the rain, withered plants can grow

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Written October 13th, 2005

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  • P r i n c e
    October 13, 2005
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    Its short ans sweet. Sometimes the meaning of a thousand words reside in a few.


  • Z-0
    October 13, 2005
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    Wise

    Ah for nice simple wisdom. True that turmoil is the catalyst for human development, more so than periods of calm.


  • Camlek
    October 13, 2005
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    Ah the comparison is fantastic. The message- that from every bad thing comes something good is beautiful. You have written words of wisdom here and in only two lines. It really works, it's amazing how it flows, even though there's only two lines. Really well done! xxx