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Well he was the little boy singing reveille
A fire cracker through the night
His father owned moonshine distilleries
Said "wake up boy, get it right"
But you... You don't ever
You're never satisfied
You're never satisfied
Your zombie love
Make a zombie cry
Your monstrous love
Make a monster cry
Well she was the little girl raised in a nunnery
Immaculate to my eyes
Oh mother superior what the girl does to me
Leave a blues man shit kicking and blind
Ah-ah you...
You're never satisfied
You're never satisfied
Your zombie love
Make a zombie cry
Your monstrous love
Make a monster cry
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Written October 12th, 2005
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yep it works
read it a couple times before i listened to it.
you've got talent but you know that
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Wow, that was great. What an interesting piece, and so unusual compared to other poems. Nice job.
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I love the song!
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dig it.
Very lyrical and cool.
nice imagery -
You make music?
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I did, otherwise it would be plagery.
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Great lyrics, sadly I will have to listen a bit later since I'm in the middle of a class. Who wrote it?
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It plays better, click the link, hear the song.
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Very derivative of Lou Reed circa 1975.
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I read and re-read this piece. You do have your own unique style. Ididn't have a chance to go to the link but I will.
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What a well structred piece for the lyrical read.It is orchestrated with such a tone that keep the flow moving and jump with such a speed! This is an amazing write. Your title is excellent and of course the background is wonderful
Blessing
ICULookn -
Very talented you are and very up on your vocab. Great poem here not like to many I have read on this site. You definatley have your own style.
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This was a really powerful piece....woah...keep it up, this was great, muchas amor, Amanda
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you are truely amazing
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I think this is great, I didn't get to hear it, but the lyrics are superb... much love and light
Karen -
Brilliant! Wonderful! Great! I loved and adored it. It was perfect and everything else. ^_^
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you need a mac. and a safari browser
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I like the words, how they flow. I will have to try to listen another time, as my pc is still being funky. Bleh.. Athena
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Vewy impwessive. I like
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gr8t
Reamarkable flow of lines by you dear AP Horus8 ! Good treat !
make everyone cry with your monstrous love baby !
Emotions written with much care,deserves the applause.
IN YOUR OWN WORDS
WHAT YOU REVEALS?
ARE A COMBINATION
OF HEART , SOUL, AND APPEAL
WHERE HIS MONSTROUS LOVE GROWS
IS IN OUR HOME
HIS LOVE STAYS
AND WILL NEVER ROAM!
TENDER ARE THE MOMENTS IN TIME
FOR BETTER OR WORSE
YES IT'S BEEN THE TEST OF TIME!
BUT, WITHOUT REGRET
I'M STILL THE ONE
THAT GETS HIM GOING
I'M STILL THE ONE
THAT KEEPS HIM GLOWING
WE'RE STILL HAVING FUN
YEP AFTER COUNTING YET!
STILL
NO REGRETS FOR LEAVING YOU AP horus...hehe
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