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Life

Life is like a game
that you play everyday.
This game never gets boring.
It lasts even after death.
You soul dwells with God
forever in Heaven.
That may be hard to grasp!
But it's true!
So live life to the fullest
and treat everyday like
a new game.

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Written October 12th, 2005

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  • Alyss in Wonderland
    November 9, 2006
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    Oh yeah? well, I challenge you to a TWISTER MATCH! (continues ranting for another 3 hours)


  • Ransomed-n-Redeemed
    November 9, 2006
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    I like games! woohoo! baseball, and monololy, and twister(I am the reigning champion!) and...(continues ranting on for three hours)


  • Alyss in Wonderland
    November 9, 2006
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    ...you don't have much to comment on. so we can't drive you crazy if.....


  • Alyss in Wonderland
    October 19, 2005
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    lol. so, so true. never boring...thats what my parents say when i tell them that they're weird...

  • KF poetry
    October 14, 2005
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    That's so true. Life is never boring at all! Stressful, mind-wreking, idiotc, and chaos, but no. Not boring. Good write, keep it up!
    ~Felicia~

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