by Steven Beesley (c) published 16th August, 2005
Another Fine Day (Huitain):
Beauty as far as you can see.
As I look, it feels like a dream;
wind in my hair, I feel so free.
Nature surrounds me, reigns supreme.
In the distance I see a stream.
Twilight now begins to descend,
dew on the leaves begins to gleam.
A fine day is about to end.
Author notes
Huitain:
A Spanish poetry form, it resolves around the number 8 - there are 8 lines to the poem, with 8 syllables per line. The rhyming scheme is ABABBCBC.
Written October 12th, 2005
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5 Stars *****
this is realy lovely write... tottally impressive..
... well.. tell you what.. i am glad that you msged me.. cos now i a just enjoyed reading your writes .. seems like you are a very experienced and lively poet ... really nice work here... thanks for making me learn about "Huitan"
nice write..... good work..... thanks for sharing my dear friend
*hugs and kisses*
*gives choco*
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend ....................... just keep it up ........................ your humble little friend .....................
....................... ......................... .................. - vic ( who else???? )
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What a lovely poem, Steven and a form I haven't heard of before but it's very nice. I love poetry about nature and this one is very vividly expressed.. the imagery is beautiful
Dee
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beautiful
i love nature! it is awsome to see it so acuratly described. This is beautiful. Keep at it!
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