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Shadowed cries

When the sun goes down
I awake
As the mist covers the land
I breath
When the pale moon washes over me
I live

Hear my call echo
through distant darkness
A plead lost to your cries
And we weap together

I ride west chasing the sun
Hoping that in my futile attempt
I will catch a single sun ray
So that I may bring it back to you

Perhapes then
Your wails will no longer haunt the land
Your tormented soul will find peace
And age old fears will be put to rest

I would bleed for you
I would pleade for you
I would lay down and die
Just so you wouldn't have to cry

So my quest continues
And I ride on
Looking for a way
To silence the banshee's song

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Written January 28th, 2003

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  • Aardvark32
    February 23, 2003
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    excellent

    I liked this! It was well done.. it's cool! nice poem! your others are cool too... especially the gummy bear one. Those things are just so fun to eat! like.. goldfish! You can have fun biting their heads off.. well, umm. yea that's it for now. =]

  • CursedRav3n
    January 30, 2003
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    neutral

    Stupid bevin. I know you're talking about Dani. =)


  • NurseFloyd
    January 29, 2003
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    excellent

    I like it! good job! YAY!
    ~Monkey