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Diseased And Blind

Smashing her reflection
punching straight into the stomach
the shards piercing her eyes

Blind ;good; its what she wanted
her reflection no longer has to be seen
at least not by her eyes

The intense agony she felt
when she walked past a mirror
the pain; indescribable

"This is all just a disease" they said
"It's not really you you're seeing"
Though it was all B.S. to her

She knew who she was
no disease impaired her vision
at least not anymore

Author notes

Heh.
Written October 12th, 2005

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  • bleedingarms
    October 14, 2005
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    thank you!

  • emptymind
    October 14, 2005
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    I really like this poem, i didn't get it the first time i read it but the second time i understood what you were saying and i thought you captured everything very well.. Great write - kate.