So many days have passed
And many sleepless nights too
with just the thoughts of what
I am to do about you
you haven't called
or even come by
it's like you don't care
but might i ask why
with all the love I've given you
so many times before
you just simply trampled on my heart
and tossed it out the door
we talked about our future
and made so many plans
just thinking about tomorrow
made everything so grand
but now those days are gone
i guess there won't be wedding bells
and no more time will be spent
just waiting to exhale.
Author notes
This one I wrote a couple of years ago when I was still much more naive than I am now. Hope ya likes it!
Written December 16th, 2002
A contest entry
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300 points, ended February 27, 2007, 5 entries
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so sad, the loss of love is always heartbreaking.
Thank you for entering my contest.
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This is very good. Good job. Keep them coming. Good luck on the contest. I appologize for my weak comment.
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Keep writting!!
You will come out of it stronger. Get into your poem writting and read others. Yours are great. I'll be back and read more.
Is LA - the city or the state.
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I think i like the fist one better but this is cool
-allie
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