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Halloween Tongue Twister

Gray gruesome ghastly ghosts goblins
gesticulate gravely gibber ghoulishly
genteel gentlemen gripe grimace grovel

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Say 5 times rapidly.
Written October 12th, 2005

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  • Snowing Kisses silver member
    October 20
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    love it...thanx...T


  • glenn shannon silver member
    October 4
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    this was short funny and very clever i couldnt say it 5 times in a hurry cool work


  • xBloodPromisedx
    September 22
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    LOL!

    Again, great.


  • xBloodPromisedx
    September 20
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    Great, now I can't talk! LOL! Awesome... Good luck in my contest!


  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    November 17, 2008
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    Thanks for your entry

    lol Quite the tongue twister that's for sure. Who knew such aliteration could be acheived with the letter G.

    Thank you for entering. Good luck in the contest and thank you for following the rules.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment



    Happy Halloween and God Bless
    Tammy


  • daviscth silver member
    September 27, 2008
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    LOL. I like this!!! Good luck....


  • Frozentearz
    October 9, 2007
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    I am sure the kids are going to have a wonderful time
    trying to do this at the fire I can imagine the laughter it will bring,
    Thanks for joining in,
    Frozentearz

  • Frozentearz
    September 23, 2007

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    Lol this was really cute, I could imagine the kids sitting by the fire, each taking a try at this,
    I am sure there would be many chuckles.
    Thanks for joining in,
    And Happy Hauntings,
    Frozentearz


  • Frogzter gold member
    September 22, 2007
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    Can't get past the first time! This is a challenge!
    Thanks for entering and best wishes!

    Frogz~


  • qnhoneybee
    November 2, 2005
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    Sorry can't read it 5 times fast. lol! I tried and didn't get past once everytime. This was very good and ghostly. The first Halloween one I have seen in this contest and out as a matter of fact. So to me it's original.

    Thnak-you for entering!


  • suseann
    November 1, 2005
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    Ok,you got me on the second repeat.~~~Suseann


  • YerTweetyness
    October 24, 2005
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    Hey, this was a good one!
    Thank you for this entry!!

    Yertweetyness


  • lifeisjazzy
    October 13, 2005
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    really twisty

    you've used such huge words and i don't even know the meanings of mosr of them but its really a difficult twister with a great twists.......!

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