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On the Wings of Her Imaginary Man

 

 

 

A man without equal, he, full of loving and kindness
awakening her dreams like no other has done
able to carry her off to the to the brightest of places
giving her warmth, kissing the tears from her many sad faces.
Ah, how I strive be the one!

 

But I am bound here, in my material blindness-
with a heavy darkness, and lack of the sun;
What can be made of such tragic cases
as I, witnessing her imaginary embraces
until my reality becomes undone?

 

You may laugh that I am so utterly jealous
of a man who really doesn’t exist
just because he can easily mend her heart
or because I never see them apart,
you’d ask, “What madness, this?!”

 

The madness is love, perhaps true, maybe pure,
more like simple, far less than the imaginary bliss
that her man can give, but it’s here nevertheless;
I still my heart, but without success,
and I irresistibly plant my own imaginary kiss...

 

Out in the world there are troubles and care
with things that are real, far more often than not;
so how can I be taken, and so utterly smitten
and contesting with he who is fancifully written?
I should desist, but I cannot!

 

What does this all mean? Where do I go next?!!!
Just shoot me down right here on the spot!
Such foolish desires, am I reaching for candy?
Or worse, simply being a meandering dandy?
Perhaps I’m caught up in a sinister plot...

 

So she sails away on the wings of her man
an imaginary man, yes it’s hard to believe!
But it’s true, so I settle on her heart’s prominade
strumming my tune, ready to fade,
then I realize- she hasn’t asked me to leave...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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What happens when I should be working instead... so I better go finish my work now!
Written October 12th, 2005

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  • Molly Densmore silver member
    October 15, 2005
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    This is truly beautiful and so well written. I love how you write and your expressions from your words and heart. The scenery is absolutely gorgeous and so like a dream. Like the dreams I write about. Thanks for sending me the link, I have been failing on keeping up with everyones poetry. I do like yours and I am behind, I will try hard to catch up. Very beautiful indeed, very beautiful. I loved your saying about reading poetry that is written from a family member is like kissing your sister?,, In ways that is so true, never thought of it like that, but so true. Thanks again..


  • Touchof1der silver member
    October 13, 2005
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    When you write from the deepest chamber of your heart, you create some of the most beautiful poetry Wayne. This is quite exquisite even with it's touchs of sadness and reality. Whomever this was aimed it, they are quite lucky to have a man with so much heart and soul feel this way towards them. nice done sweetie!
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • whispersoftly
    October 13, 2005
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    Mr Wbiro this is lovely & a wonderful write, soo much love and wanting in it, the background is stunning as well as the words and the images they portray a beautiful peice well done xx Ms Softly


  • Anna Emkah
    October 13, 2005
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    This is so beautiful Wayne, but at the same time I read some sadness between the lines. This is a romantic poem indeed and I love it. I am so pleased that you showed your talent again. It would be so sad when that would be wasted because of all your silliness. Keep up this kind of poetry. It's so beautiful. and for a great poet, who does not seem to know it yet. Anna.


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 12, 2005
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    Wayne, this is quite beautiful, my Friend...I especially liked the first two stanzas...lovely imagery, great verbiage, smooth flow...I'm impressed with this one...a wonderful write...I'm happy to see it, as well... Wanda


  • SexyAngel0418
    October 12, 2005
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    THis is a great poem!! It is awesome... You did a great job!! It is very creative (as always)... I really like this one AP dad!!!

    Hugs,
    Your brightest Angel!!!


  • chills gold member
    October 12, 2005
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    treat

    stunningly well put together.


  • Heart Sutra
    October 12, 2005
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    This is a great twist on the unrequited love but being in love in spite of it. I like also how we are reminded that often real love is right in front of us waiting patiently for our care and attention but we often have missed it because we are chasing the illusion or the fantasy of an idea of a person or of love. Great writing.


  • Rose Chloris
    October 12, 2005
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    "I irresistibly plant my own imaginary kiss..." Good line. Thanks for sharing.


  • XhiddenxBEAUTYx
    October 12, 2005
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    this is really beautifully written. you have a lot of talent!Keep it up! I really liked the imagery....wonderufl!
    God bless!


  • sunny day
    October 12, 2005
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    So Beautiful and filled with emotion!!!

    wbiro, A very emotional write. It was beautiful, flowing so gracefully like a river to the sea. Your words created lovely imagery and captured me, the reader so intently. Maybe you shouldn't be working, but writing more of these. A very excellent piece and I thank you for sharing it with all of us.
    I love the background you used as well. I haven't looked at your work for a while, I'm happy I saw this in the featured box. I get so caught up with all the great works in here that I don't always spend enough time with the authors that I already know have so much talent. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with all of us. Love and blessings to you for the sunniest of days. Joyce

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