I’m sick and tired
Of feeling down on life.
I think I’m going to stand up,
Stand up and fight.
Don’t hold me back,
Don’t you dare think about it.
Please just love me
And be there when I need you.
I have to do this on my own
So no one can help me.
No one can help me
Through this part in my life.
The waves crash down
All around me,
But I still must
Do this on my own.
Surrounded by darkness,
Surrounded by fear.
I still must fight alone.
I still must do this on my own.
By: Sharcu(Tim)
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I wasn't sure what catagories this fit under. I started off with the first stanza and then the rest just fit into place. I wrote this about 3 weeks ago or so and didn't finish it until today cause I wasn't sure what the meaning of the poem was. Maybe it'll make sense to someone....
Written October 12th, 2005
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strong strong poem my friend. this was a very good write but sad. and i dont know what might have been going wrong, it doesnt change who you are in my eyes you are an amazing friend who has blessed me. you are strong, kind, caring and so much more. and have proved to me so many times that i am not alone. great job once again my friend dont ever think you are alone
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lol its an ok poem i dont think it flows very well no offense but not your best..... but don't listen to me lol
xoxo~wind dancer -
Ya, I know...
I wrote this before I met you, but even when I did write it nothing truly wrong was going on... but thanks. 
Same applies for you... I'll be there for you through thick or thin.
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Awww sweetie. You are not alone. You don't have to take your battle on alone. I am here for you and I will stand up with you. I will fight with you for you are a part of me. I am here for you and I will always be there for you. Never will you be alone and no you will not fight on your own. I demand to be able to fight with you. !!!!! It makes sense its an emotional battle. Kelsy
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