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Truth and Lies

I spoke the truth,
that was never heard.
He never believed,
and felt deceived.

 ~~Suseann~~


I told a lie,
and it was heard.
She always believed,
feeling no grief.

 ~~Suseann~~

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Written October 12th, 2005

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  • Immortal Flesh
    October 23, 2005
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    I had to comment on this one cause this is what exactly the contest challenges.
    and you have done it perfectly, short but briliant!
    Nice job.


  • puzzledone121
    October 14, 2005
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    yes, usually, people maintain their own perspective of things..what is real and what is not dont really matter..and thanks for visiting my site...


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 12, 2005
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    TRULY WONDERFUL

    Both are very lovely and a joy to read. Such few words yet with so much meaning.


  • xtootiex
    October 12, 2005
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    ooo short but sweet. great job


  • DeadBeauty
    October 12, 2005
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    very nice. I thought people would have a hard time trying to understand what I wanted from them but obviously not
    Well done!

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