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I told you

I told you I feel no more.
That I love no more.
Ifeell no more pain.
All I do is bring pain.
I hurt the one's I loved.
Death pain all I must bring
I told you im not worth anything.
I don't care about any one.
Not even myself.
I don't care if I burn in hell.
I told the world im back deal with it.
Now they can call me gdog and mean
You don't want to now.
Try all you want it's a waste
Death is nothin to fear.
Fear the one who hold's the.
Key to death in his heart.

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Written October 12th, 2005

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  • BlackedAshes
    October 13, 2005
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    O.0 hmmmm ill just go what with they said ok ok

  • MichelleLynn
    October 13, 2005
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    Wow this is awesome! I am here for u if u ever need to talk... u are an awesome person and you deserve good things... everyone does... keep up the great work!
    shellie

  • Marinesprincess
    October 13, 2005
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    Good

    Yea, I agree with Meme and Lola, We are here for you, And U were there to watch the ending of it all, And even though you dont care if you Burn in Hell, I do!! Anyways Nice write, Even though you know how I feel about "dark" writes, Keep it up


  • LolaUnscripted
    October 12, 2005
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    I agree with me me, Dale, You cant let the world crumble beneath your feet, pick up dust yourself off and try again, life isnt bad, I used to think that way..you were there to see the ending of it all, and I had to do what was right for myself, and my family. just know no matter what, meme, shay, myself and candyce are here for you!
    Lola


  • afirefly7
    October 12, 2005
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    dark

    i know tht most of tht is not true... you cnt feel pain if you dnt have love in your heart... i see your pain in shays eyes too im not mad but i am hurt meme


  • BritBrat
    October 12, 2005
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    wow i know that we got into a little arugement but i want you to know that i am all ways here for you no matter what happens. Just because we both had a bad day doesn't mean we should stop talking. Great write and Keep up the good work.


  • devils-angel69
    October 12, 2005
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    Dale,i understand ur pain....life will go on....maybe or maybe not with shelby.....good write....ur so dark....u like to write about death and shit....keep up the good writes.....!!!!

    devils-angel69....

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