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Calling All Monsters

As the chains rattle in the attic,
The door creaks on its hinges.
My heart starts beating faster.
my face is making scary cringes.

Ghosts come haunt on Halloween,
dead rise up from graves below.
For revenge of enemies on earth,
they come to scare the human foe.

Witches now gather in the forest,
a cauldron boiling a nasty brew.
Hungry for little boys and girls,
beware they may come after you.

Cook you up with frogs and snails,
boil flesh off the bone in the pot.
The only way to save your life is,
give them all the candy you got. 

Frankenstein has a screw loose,
the grim reaper is on the prowl.
Dracula looks for a bloody Mary, 
Wolf-man is beginning to howl.

Street filled with scary monsters,
looking so menacing and so mean.
But do not worry nor be afraid of, 
these kids dressed for Halloween.




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Written October 12th, 2005

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  • Sandygram
    October 23, 2006
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    I want to thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. This is a great contest. Take care, Sandy


  • Sandygram
    October 23, 2006
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    Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem, I so appreciate it. Take care, Sandy


  • -Honey-
    October 22, 2006
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    haha I loved it. I really enjoyed how you made it sound so creepy, and then ending with "But do not worry nor be afraid of, these kids dressed for Halloween." It threw in a nice twist. good job!


  • ImpaleRose
    October 17, 2005
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    That is so cute ^_^ I lloovvee happy endings HALLOWEEN JOB!^_^


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    October 17, 2005
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    this was beyond awesome
    i totally loved it
    very cute and nicely written

    i enjoyed it very much
    And i loved these lines
    "the only way you can save your life is
    give them all the candy that you've got

    Beware, Frankenstein has a screw loose
    beware, the grim reaper is on the prowl
    beware, Dracula looks for a bloody Mary
    beware, Wolf-man is beginning to howl"

    keep on writing

    Nooni


  • Sandygram
    October 13, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Ah thank you Flo. That was a wonderful comment. Iam glad you enjoyed it. Take care, Sandy


  • Flo Varekai
    October 12, 2005
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    spooky

    This rocks out loud! Great Job Sandy!!! Perfect for halloween!!!! Very fuuny! My favorite part is:
    Beware, Frankenstein has a screw loose
    beware, the grim reaper is on the prowl
    beware, Dracula looks for a bloody Mary
    beware, Wolf-man is beginning to howl

    I love the part where you put. Dracula looks for a bloody mary. I thought that was funny. Great job mum!


  • Sandygram
    October 12, 2005
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    WONDERFUL CONTEST

    Thank you so much for the nice comment. This is an awesome contest. Take care, Sandy


  • Sandygram
    October 12, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you for the great comment.I so appreciate it. Take care, Sandy

  • Draven9967
    October 12, 2005
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    Haha, this one made me smile, It was somewhat spooky, great write

    <3


  • xtootiex
    October 12, 2005
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    well...yay u got the authors comments done cant remember wot i said before about this poem but i like the ending. and the pic goes well. so...best of luck in the contest x x x

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