by Steven Beesley (c) published on 26th August,2005
Garden of Eden (Kyrielle)
Dawn's most quiet and precious hours,
come with the fresh scent of flowers.
In colorful warm and rich hues,
spectacular and wondrous views.
soothing fresh dew make pastures lush,
this garden of eden so very plush.
Into your heart does peace infuse,
spectacular and wondrous views.
The air filled with such sweet scents.
Daily occurrences of such extraordinary events.
Nature's facets do really amuse,
Spectacular and wondrous views.
Natural wonders we see far and wide,
we must conserve, we must take pride.
Gifts from God we should not abuse!
Spectacular and wondrous views.
Author notes
Written October 12th, 2005
Kyrielle:
french poetry form, it has a refrain - the final line of each stanza is the same. 4 lined stanzas with a rhyming pattern od aabB. A rhyme pattern of abaB may also be used if desired.
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This was one brilliant piece of poetic marvel. I love it when our new members take a form of poetry and give it such an abundant life within the lines. This really impressed me as much as your other piece that I read. Truly remarkable.
~ John
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You give quite an honor to the beauty of nature. You are right to describe them as a gift to be embraced and not 'abused'. You've done well with this form. Many times it can be difficult to write a poem with a repeating line. I have seen some kryielles where the author repeats the line without making any effort to ensure the line fits with the rest of the lines in its stanza. To me, it seems you wrote this piece with little effort. It is beautiful.
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