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You let me know

The look you have in your eyes when you look at me
Lets me know that you love me
The way you caress my leg as we drive in your car
Lets me know that you care
Sharing our hopes and dreams with each other
Lets me know that we belong together
Sometimes these things aren't always clear
But you let me know

Author notes

I have had writers block for quite sometime and havent written an actual poem. I was inspired in a strange way to write this poem (not something i want to share)But here it is.Wow amazing what love does, and you see it when you arent in love anymore.
Written October 12th, 2005

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  • All washed up
    December 18, 2005
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    I personally like how you make your poems shorter. That makes them easier to read and stay attentive to what you are actually saying without all of the other nonsense that makes poems uninteresting. Keep it up. And as for the writers block, are you sure that you had it to begin with or maybe you just thought you did.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 18, 2005
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    The little signs of true love are so real and so true. This is wonderful, it is very emotional. Wonderful words.

    ~whisper


  • They Call Me Fancy
    October 13, 2005
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    Sweet

    Awwwwww, this is very sweet! . This really is how it is with someone in my life (Though, we aren't dating or anything like that ). I guess the littliest things sometimes are the things that reveal to us just how that person feels. I liked this simplicity in this, and the warm fuzzy feeling I got , I liked it, wonderful job and I wish you and yours a very happy life together . .....................................

    ♥ Fancy


  • queen Moderators member
    October 12, 2005
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    Sometimes all we need is just a little touch to be reassurred we are loved. Excellent poem


  • autumnsong
    October 12, 2005
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    that was sooooooo sweet...

    i agree with fearforyourlife. it is short but sweet all the same. if i was a guy and someone told me that poem, i would fall in love more with the girl.

    all in all, it's a very sweet and lovely poem...

  • fearforyourlife
    October 12, 2005
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    so sincere (sp?)

    short, sweet, and to the point. very easy to read and relate to. i think almost anyone who reads this piece will know what you mean, it surely triggers thoughts of my own situations.
    verry nice job! you may enjoy reading my poem "alone together"
    let me know how you like it.
    -dan

  • Marinesprincess
    October 12, 2005
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    Aww, I loved it! It was soo sweet! Keep it up! Much Luv Hun!

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