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Death

Lurking...Silently in the shadows
Softly in the night it whispers
Trying to draw you closer
Slyly...standing on the corner
Extending its invitation
Wanting you into its home
Giving...You that deadly knife
Laughing as you take it
Slowly taking over your body
Killing...Very slowly
Numbing your whole soul
Fading away

Author notes

I wrote this at school..I was kinda singing the words...
Written October 11th, 2005

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  • Carnivore
    October 14, 2005
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    Great poem!

    Giving...You that deadly knife
    Laughing as you take it

    I really likes those lines.