I can see a place in your eyes
A past life with you and I.
A different era,in time and space
when we were together, face to face
I feel I've known you all my life,
that in the past, we may have been husband and wife
But recently we just met, and we are so good together just like a set
But still these feelings are very strong
now how can my heart be wrong
The way we laugh, the way we smile
I know we must have had a child
But now as we come back to our reality
There are forces that say we cannot be
Rules are in place, which we must abide
Cause if we don't, we will be forced to say good-bye
In another place, or another time
That is when I will make you mine
Written by: Tisha Underwood and Jason Singh
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Written January 27th, 2003
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Romantic and full of love and care. The past is so amazing and at times so painful. The world of dreams and history come in diverse heights and levels. On the waves of limited choices we travel. Great poem.
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Thank you, some of my older pieces really amaze my even.
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Amazing...!!!!!!
SENSATIONAL! MY GOODNESS, A TIME-CAPSULE! Lol. I am so impressed with this! Sometimes things we write may be for a time yet to come...
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awesome!
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:)..i realy enjoyed reading that..and will now continue to read many more..:p -
excellent
Reminds me of an Erykah Badu song, 'See you next lifetime'. -
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wow! this is beautiful. i like the feel to this poem it is very cool. ahhh wouldnt it be great if things could be. anyways great poem wonderfully written, thank you for sharing. -
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Ohhh cool write, this is beautiful. It flowed really well to and I enjoyed the meaning of this. It has a sad undertone tho mind you. Trying to have something that isn't allowed to be :( Well written
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