NO ONE KNOWS
No one knows her pain that hides
No one cares to look inside
This girl they see is quite unique
They look and stare afraid to speak
I can see the sadness in her eyes
As she grabs her books and passes by
Sounds of laughter in the hall
As they watch this girl suddenly fall
Her eyes begin to fill with tears
So I help her up to free her fears
No one knows how hard it is
For this girl to everyday live
Every night she prays to die
So she could no longer cry
And every day that she wakes
She looks across the dark green lake
Wonders if he will hear her plea
So she may live in harmony
No one knew she lost all hope
Until they found her by a rope
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Written October 11th, 2005
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wow, that is so sad. people shouldn't be so mean. i got teased when i was in school but it was never to any real extreme. this is really a sad piece. it's very well written. i loved it. i just feel so sad for that girl. but this is an excellent write.
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GREAT
JESUS CHRIST! lol i felt liek sdyaing that OKKKKK lol, i like this poem its very sublimnal i love it, i think i shall appluad you peice of work you ahve written, i hope you keep writing you have talent! keept wriritng! - Mike (sic-Risker) -
wow
amazing way to write. that way written very well.
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Wow great piece. Strong with a deep message. Great work!
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