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brides broken crown

Their faces shadowed with a frown
for it is they who appear to look down
on what it is that we want to do
no one should dictate what we do
the brides fallen broken crown
in her own fallen tears she will drown

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Written October 11th, 2005

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  • Sister Raven
    February 4, 2006
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    i really love the way you worded this, it tells of a feeling we all have, i really like it, keep writing!