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In Need

Slow soft movements, up and down my stomach
Make relaxation inevitable.
Lustful desires fill my mind
With a pure urgency
Of need.
I need your fingers to continuously
Caress my body,
With the soft dangerous touch
Which only Satan would confirm.
Gusts of air fill my lungs slowly
As if in a race to loose.
Your warm palms grab my shoulders
And support my back while you love me.
The penetration is beautiful,
The feeling just makes me sing
I Love You!
Your tongue cautiously tastes my lip
And you go to take a bite.
We kiss long and hard
As if in a movie.
But then stop,
Finish,
And take a breath.

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Written October 11th, 2005

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  • shattered-dreams-xx
    October 12, 2005
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    wow i love this piece alot...this shows the need or pleasure and also love... this is great! wonderful work!!
    crucify-then-learn


  • HopelessUnwanted
    October 11, 2005
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    You really capture how it really is to need a lovers touch. Awesome write,