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expansion

expansion

leaning over out of space
climbing over beyond time
where words erase the pace of change
and free the place confined

let us go where it is slow
where the flow of time lets go
and crowded space gives up its place
where all you know is really so

where might that be you might ask me
wherever she or he may be
when soul and spirit completely meet
meld and are not discrete

God and man and woman can
combine together without a span
between for language can expand
into god's world so grand -- it can

ellis

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Felt I was inspired.
Written October 11th, 2005

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  • kvwriter silver member
    January 22, 2008

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    Yes, Ellis, this was truly inspired, devinely. Your words gave me a measure of peace I very much needed this a.m. even though the poem was written some time ago. These words will touch hearts to come unto eternity for those it is meant to touch. Time won't bind us, we will know all, and we will be complete in "God's world so grand." Beautiful, uplifting, inspired write. Thank you for this. Hope you are well this day. My thoughts and prayers are always with you, Dear Friend.--Kel :


  • krptdnacnce
    January 5, 2008

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    All As One

    One is All-Simple and beautiful, what moore could we hope for?? And yet some will not aknowledge it for Truth. Another exceptional and informative creation, by one exceptional and informed of creation himself-BlessedBe the Spirit within Thee


  • raggyann
    December 7, 2007
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    this was just beautiful
    i wish all people felt this way